Kairi630's Comments (29)

Reminder to everyone; Please 10 Answer every question 2) please use actual whole sentences 3) please answer in such a way that your reader will understand you without having to read the original question. Thank you.

Reminder to everyone; Please 10 Answer every question 2) please use actual whole sentences 3) please answer in such a way that your reader will understand you without having to read the original question. Thank you.

Not bad, not bad. Maybe try the shorter (portrait/vertical) way like Catcher did (by accident), you got some obvious brush strokes going the long (landscape/horizontal) way that I had everyone try. This is good, but you could practice a time or two more if you really want to get better at flat and even

The lips look pretty real. I am wondering if it was from a photo or real life. Having the finger a little less curved is perfect.

good drawing

good drawing

T: I really like the value and form you decided to do on your portrait. A: I wonder what motivated you to outline the person in the picture. G: Perhaps try to make the eyes a bit smaller.

T:I like that it looks like a hand. A:why did you make the hand look like that? G:Make the background a little smoother.

it was good and you did well 2. the leg is really good and it is a good picture 3. you did good

T: I love the background of the value of this and the anime drawing at the top. A: I wonder if you used a blending stick. G: Maybe add some lighter shading around the shoe so it can have more of a touch.

T:I like the little face in the corner. A:Why did you draw a face in the corner. G:I suggest not drawing a face in the corner.

T:I like that it looks like a chair. A:Why are some of the legs skinnier then others? G:Make the legs a little straighter and bigger.

good drawing Kairi

T:I like that you tried. A:Why did you make the hand make that pose? G:I suggest that you add more creases in the hand.

1. the fingers should be a little bigger 2. why are the lines still there 3. the thumb should be bigger

I like how this drawing is spaced out pretty well letting the viewer see enough background. I wonder how many shades you intended to put. I'd recommend to try to make the fingers less skele-like and add some more smoothe lines.

I think it is well detailed But I think there a big gap between two fingers

1. that the bottom of the page 2. where are the eye brows 3. you need to have better face and it does not look like a face

it llooks googly sized I mainly think it looks confusing

I like how you did go over it several times to proceed in making it clear and visible. I wonder how many times you went over it. I would recommend to try and add more detail for the nails.

I like how each segment of the drawing for the most part seems to be in the correct place. Makes a person wonder how you got the shape so spaced out well. I would recommend to make the head stand up strait a bit more.

It looks good but I do think one arm is pretty wide and I can not see the left leg

the draw have good details like the upside down and the hands are very nice draw nice job

Very cool looking. I like this!

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Looks good!

t i like the hair it is supposed to have and then the head is really good good job. a why is your lips blue g you did a really good drawling and the eyes are pretty good to

The nose is centered very well in the middle and the hair is very in line. Im curious to know how the pinkish-red marks got on the top of the paper. I'd try to get the eyes a bit more lined up, maybe use a ruler or other tool to help, otherwise it still looks amazing.

Very cool!