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Chirp!
Posted 7 months ago by Ted (teacher at Maple Valley-Anthon Oto High School)
 
its sure is somthing but what is that something? I think you could of made the legs a little better so they didn't break
Posted 1 year ago by luke
 
looks freaky, love it
Posted 1 year ago by Beau
 
See? You can do beautiful things without ink. Facial features always get challenging when they're so small. Degas didn't capture individuality of each girl, he was more interested in the figure/gesture than their identity- so don't worry that you think you made the faces look feminine or masculine, we all struggled with that. You did an excellent job of capturing the whole thing and looks just as graceful as Degas. Well done.
Posted 1 year ago by Ted (teacher at Maple Valley-Anthon Oto High School)
 
You're well advanced of most of your peers. Just imagine how phenomenal you'll be when you conquer that persistence component! Great observation, great composition. If this were basketball, I'd be saying "swoosh- nuthin' but net." Still, this is a layup, not a 3 pointer. It's smaller than the full paper and you finished pretty early. I hope you keep drawing and keep pushing yourself further. Great job.
Posted 2 years ago by Ted (teacher at Maple Valley-Anthon Oto High School)
 
It's outstanding. Your observation is excellent as is your engagement. Your persistence, stretch & explore could all use a little more patience. It's a great drawing. Just imagine how much more phenomenal it could be with 3D modeled values in graphite, working all 5 days and not just the first 2? No shame, not guilt, and I've stipulated that it's an excellent rendering- just want to try to challenge you if I can.
Posted 2 years ago by Ted (teacher at Maple Valley-Anthon Oto High School)
 
Outstanding. 1925 Director Rupert Julian and star Lon Chaney would both be impressed. You captured the creepy vibe expertly. Your observation and perceptual skills are really coming along- so are your abilities to specifically recognize and apply values. I love how much you love drawing. Keep it up. It will be a good outlet for you when you're reading and writing thousands of lines of code!
Posted 2 years ago by Ted (teacher at Maple Valley-Anthon Oto High School)
 
I like how you made it look very realistic and very detailed. I wonder why you decided to do this picture. I would suggest making the background a bit darker for some more dimension.
Posted 2 years ago by Alivya Petersen