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At first I thought we left it on the mold too long and it broke just by drying, but you really have to remember to score, slip and deliberately fuse pieces. Just a little more focus and attention; sticj-with-it-ness, if you will. Structural integrity allows creativity, aesthetics, & expression all happen- without it, the other stuff can't do their thing.
Posted 1 year ago by Ted (teacher at Maple Valley-Anthon Oto High School)
 
Girl- Wow. PLEASE keep taking Art classes. Your observation and accurately recording what you see are outstanding! We've got to get you able to draw BIGGER though. Seems like when you finish you don't know what to do with the space around the main subject so you go for the pretty decorations. Don't get me wrong- they're drawn excellently too, but not only do you need to push past your comfort zone, you need to start considering composition too. Amazing likeness, not just a good realistic face but a specific, recognizable face AND modeled in 3D form too. You're really ahead of most artists your age, lets hunker down and see if we can't get you to stretch & explore now that you've mastered observation, engagement and persistence.
Posted 2 years ago by Ted (teacher at Maple Valley-Anthon Oto High School)
 
Excellent. Very careful and realistic. Decent range, although it could've been even broader. In the future, don't be afraid to draw bigger- as a matter of fact, you may want to try to force yourself to make things bigger. Drawing small is holding you back, it's like you're being cautious because you know you're good small but you're afraid that if you draw bigger you'll mess up. Take the risk, what do you have to lose? Challenge yourself.
Posted 2 years ago by Ted (teacher at Maple Valley-Anthon Oto High School)