Edie162's Comments (25)

This pot is well developed because of the square shoulders, which allow the neck and mouth to be layered on top. This allows the volume of the pot to be larger and creates a nice contrast. To add on, the pot becomes more wide from bottom to top which is also a good choice.

This piece has a very geometric form and has a very light value as it appears to be white. The body of the pot appears to be flat

This bisque vessel was sanded very nicely, presenting a great smooth texture. The decision to make a more narrow mouth for this long constructed piece gives it a nice addition to the overall vessel. There are no open seams visible to the eye making it also a nice addition to the piece.

This vessel shows an adequate use of bevelling, scoring slipping and securing to create a vessel with no overt flaws in its structure. There is very little symmetry but it doesn’t seem to harm the vessel. Overall its a nice vessel with some clear room to grow design wise

I like how the pot is original and has its own shape to it. It is styled differently and looks very nice. Its also a good height and you can see the different body parts of the pot.

The vessel is very smooth, especially the edges. The top of the pot is clean and symmetrical.

Your neck and body have a simple contrast in angels that complement each other decently. Your pot’s body appears smooth on each side and quite symmetrical. When looking inside the mouth, the edges are smooth and almost “welcoming” to objects like flowers.

This is the largest art peace i have seen in a long time. I hope that this controlled peace will last a long time. Also it looks so full of spaces.

This vessel has a strong geometric form as exhibited by the angular planes of the shoulder and body walls. This type of form can create contrast because of the difference between the smooth surfaces of each side and the defined edges that emphasize proportion. Additionally, the narrowing of the shoulders and smaller neck draws a unique emphasis towards the mouth and top of this vessel.

The variety of patterns with different line densities and colors on layered surfaces creates visual texture and emphasizes contrast and rhythm throughout the piece. Additionally, the sharp, angular forms used on each element of the piece are used well to create asymmetry while still maintaining balance and unity in the piece.

You pot is very detailed and put together. I think the combo of colors u did go well together.

The blues and the metallic correspond with each other perfectly. And the shape o the pot was made beautifully.

Your pot was glazed very well and I love how the colors complement each other. Your color choice gives a different visual depending on how the color reflects the light at different angles. The Lacey rim makes your pot unique and brings movement to your pot, it makes it feel alive. Great Job!

The pinch pots surface is profoundly smooth all throughout your pot, you visibly stayed consistent with the texture.

The sides of your coil pot look well scored, slipped, and secured as there are no visible gaps in between each coil.

The visual of the pinch pot drawing is extremely well drawn, realistic, and shaded perfectly.

The pot is well structured thick and stable

This blueprint is very well drawn and paints a clear picture of what the final product is meant to look like

the shape creates a very functional and traditional design

Your pot looks so good and is perfectly smooth.

The walls of your pot seems thick and stable.

Your pots shape is good and it looks very strong.

This is a perfectly shaped pot

Your pot is very smooth with no finger marks

The smooth mouth of the pot almost perfectly shapes how the outer body of the pot looks.