Hi Cian, Thanks for adding a title and artist statement for your artwork! I can see you used the curving lines to create the illusion of the waving flag! It looks like you missed some of the important directions for creating value in the red stripes. If you use a crayon or colored pencil, you can make the center of the stripe lighter. When it's lighter in the middle, it adds to the illusion! I hope that helps! Thanks for sharing your art with me! Keep creating, :) Ms. Beatrice
- Michelle (teacher at John Middleton Elementary School (1-5)) on May 19, 2020
Hi Cian, I'm glad you're continuing to create things that you enjoy! Keep creating, :) Ms. Beatrice
- Michelle (teacher at John Middleton Elementary School (1-5)) on May 1, 2020
Wasn't it fun learning how to fold a book from just ONE piece of paper? Great job designing a unique cover! :) Ms. Beatrice
- Michelle (teacher at John Middleton Elementary School (1-5)) on April 13, 2020
Such a great way of showing your imagination.. -- Hera
- on March 7, 2017
Wow.. what an amazing birds view of the snowman, very nice. --
- on December 28, 2016
This is so beautiful... -- Hera
- on November 28, 2016
Wow this is nice, you continue to suprise us. Keep up the good work. -- Hera