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Jack, I love your rendering of the knotted fabric. It is simple but easily read. I love the way it is positioned on the paper. Great observational drawing!!! Marmie
- Polly on November 20, 2024
 
Jack, I am so excited to see your mastery of the forms, rendering 3D on a flat plane. Great job! Imagine how you can expand on these basics, building to create more complicated and interconnected forms and structures. Keep going with this. Love, Marmie
- Polly on November 6, 2024
 
Dear Jack, your love of sneakers and design really shows here. I love the details and how you used up the space and used different lettering. What a great placement of the large shoe and how you incorporated it into your face. Great job! Marmie
- Polly on November 29, 2022
 
Jack, I recognize all the techniques and concepts you have combined in this work.You have represented important art concepts that were mastered by Renaissance artists and have been explored since. Well done!!! Marmie
- Marmie on October 26, 2022
 
Dear Jack, I am excited about your shield as it shows what you are most passionate about - cars and hockey. I can tell you took time to create the logo’s on the shield, creating a very powerful center of interest. The red, yellow and black on white really pop so my eye looks long and hard at this area. Just as using color and shape for strength in art work, so too in writing you use strong descriptive words to express meaning and your ideas. One is always learning and I love to see you try hard to expand your abilities. Great work!!!
- Marmie on March 26, 2022
 
Woo hoo, you are designing homes! It looks like you've got all the important things in there. Is there a place for me to hang out?
- Sarah on February 9, 2022
 
Jack your crest is terrific. I love how your banners at the top and bottom look 3-dimensional yet they are flat. That is a fun trick! And I'm glad to see Boston is your favorite team! Love you.
- Sarah on February 9, 2022
 
Jack, this looks like a great game room for a vacation at the beach. Maybe Rara can design this into your next home too!
- Gub on December 23, 2021
 
You have created some great patterns here. Good work! Did you learn about quilting and the story they tell?
- Rah Rah on November 20, 2021
 
There are so many cool things going on in this picture. You put so much detail in it - you must have worked very hard. Can you guess what my favorite part is? Okay, I'll tell you: the palm tree! It makes me remember our wonderful vacation. I can still see you sitting out by the pool underneath the rustling palm trees.
- Rah Rah on November 20, 2021
Jack - I absolutely love this! I love that you chose the Golden Gate Bridge and flying cars are so cool. And I wish we had a bacon slide. I love your creativity. Can't wait to see your next masterpiece! Love, Mom
- Ellen (Mother) on October 20, 2021
 
Jack, What a great looking fortress you drew. I can just visualize all the warriors hiding in it and waiting for the enemy to show up to attack. It has all the cool details you would want. I love seeing all the things your imagination comes up with for your drawings. Keep working hard. Love, Dad
- John (Father) on May 25, 2021
 
Jack, What a great picture! I can see the water with the fish, the boats, and then the hot air balloons flying over them in front of the mountains. All the different colors really make the picture pop. It reminds me of the movie Around the World in 80 Days. We will have to watch it some time. Keep up the great work. Love, Dad
- John (Father) on May 25, 2021
Dear Jack, I love this work. It brings back many happy memories of our times together as we vacationed. This work really is a favorite and the hot air balloons take over the space and really energize your picture space. You did such a great job filling the spaces so my eye moves all around with interest and pleasure. I enjoyed reading your explanation of your work. It is so nice having that posted with your art work. Keep up the careful work as you strive to express yourself in word and picture.
- Marmie on May 25, 2021
 
Jack, This drawing reminds me of the Parthenon in Athens, Greece that your mom and I saw on vacation. I love the details in the triangle part and the columns. You will have to let me know what the black things are in the grass. I couldn't quite figure them out. Keep up the great work with your drawings. They are so much fun to look at. Love, Dad
- John (Father) on April 22, 2021
 
Jack, This is such an amazing drawing of the lighthouse and island. It reminds me of a lighthouse I once saw in North Carolina. I think it was called the candy cane lighthouse because of the stripes on it. You are always so good about putting some much detail into your pictures. It makes me feel like I am right there in the picture. Keep up the hard work and keep on creating awesome drawings. Love, Dad
- John (Father) on March 16, 2021
 
Jack, This is such a cool rocket and solar system. It almost looks like it could be a glow in the dark picture. I bet it was fun drawing all the planets and the different shapes and sizes that they come in. I hoped you learned a lot about each one. Keep up the great work in art. It is such much fun seeing what you create in school. Love, Dad
- John (Father) on March 16, 2021
 
Dearest Jack, I am so excited you studied the Amazon. Do you think you would like to visit the Amazon. It is very wild. I really like how you have bird and animal life. I particularly like the colorful bird in the tree. I can just imagine the wild sounds. And then there. Is a beautiful flower. I think you did a wonderful job capturing all the characteristics of the amazon. So proud of you and your hard work. Love, Marmie
- Marmie on February 24, 2021
 
Jack, This is a pretty cool drawing. I feel like I am under the water in the Arctic with all those strange fish that live in the deep part of the ocean. Keep up all the hard work in art. Love, Dad
- John (Father) on February 9, 2021
 
Jack, Great job on the cactus! It so detailed and life like. You have a great gift. Keep up the hard work. Love, Dad
- John (Father) on February 9, 2021
 
Jack, Great job on this artwork. The parrot looks so life like. I feel like I am being transported in to a tropical rain forest of the jungle with all the trees and animals. It is so great to see how detailed your drawings are. I love how much you use your imagination in art class. Keep up the great work. Love, Dad
- John (Father) on February 9, 2021
 
Jack, This picture reminds me that winter is upon us and that it is starting to get cold out and all the leaves will be disappearing from all the trees. I love how you made it look like the sun is setting in the background in behind a snow covered hill. The tree is all alone in the foreground as the main focus of the picture. Very cool drawing indeed. Love, Dad
- John (Father) on December 8, 2020
 
Jack, Nice job with the football player. Looks to me like you chose to draw a Kansas City Chiefs player. I like you incorporated the field with end zones and the scoreboard in the background. Keep up the great art work! Love, Dad
- John (Father) on December 8, 2020
 
Jack, This fish is really cool. I love how your name blends into the fish making it almost look like a sort of camouflage. You are a very talented artist and I hope you stick with it. Love, Dad
- John (Father) on October 7, 2020
 
Jack, I love seeing your art work. You do such a great job with the details. These cars are pretty awesome. I hope you decide some day to be a car designer. I think you will be great at it. Keep up the great work. Love, Dad
- John (Father) on October 7, 2020
Jack, I love that your and Elsa’s picture look so different. You surely show your love of cars and the details they are so cool. Happy art making!
- Marmie on October 7, 2020
 
Dear Jack, I love this work. Klimt is a favorite artist of mine. He tried new things in making his art. That made him very interesting and willing to take risks. He had a lot to say in his art. The patterns on the clothing were done so carefully. I can see you took your time. Great work and effort. I am so pleased your art teacher shares and inspires you with the work of so many great artists. Love, Marmie
- Marmie on December 18, 2019
Jack, I love this work of art and Klimt is one of my favorite artists. His work was different from what was being done by other artists at the time. I am so glad your art teacher shows the work of famous artists and tells you about his life. You are learning so much. I love all the patterns you used to decorate the clothing and so carefully done too. I am so proud of you. Love, Marmie
- Marmie on December 11, 2019
How beautiful, Jack! Your pattern does look very Klimt-like. I love all your symbols. My favorite Klimt painting is in my favorite museum in New York. Next time we are in New York we should check it out. Keep up your detailed work. Love you!
- Rah Rah on December 4, 2019
Wow Jack! This is pretty cool. The baby you drew looks so life like. I really like all the designs that you put on the outfit. Love, Dad
- John (Father) on November 30, 2019
 
Jack, I really like this spooky looking house. It reminds me of the fun houses at carnivals, where you never know what is going to be behind the next corner. I love seeing your new artwork. Keep working hard! Love, Dad
- John (Father) on November 14, 2019
 
I absolutely love this project, Jack. I hope you will share what your symbols mean.
- Rah Rah on October 30, 2019
Jack, This is such a cool design you made for the quilt. I could picture it being a blanket in our family room and everyone getting to use it to stay warm in the winter. The shapes and designs are very well done. Keep up the great work in art class! Love, Dad
- John (Father) on October 25, 2019
 
Jack your cover is wonderful! I love the pattern you made. Your use of black and white makes it striking. Some of the shapes remind me of the logos and flags you like to draw. Do you know I have a sketchbook too? So does Marmie. We can compare them when I see you next. I can't wait to see what you put inside! Love you!
- on September 11, 2019
Jack, I like the designs you made on the front of your journal cover. I can't wait to see what you end up putting on the inside. Keep up the great work! Love, Dad
- John (Father) on September 9, 2019
 
Jack, This is such a cool drawing. It reminds me a lot of the one that is in Paris and NYC. I hope someday as a family we will get to see all these great places that you have drawn in person. You are an amazing artist! Keep up the great work. Love, Dad
-- Dad
- on June 10, 2019
 
Jack, You did such a great job on this picture. The buildings look like they are rising from the picture and the background colors make it look like the end of the day with the sun setting over the city. Keep up the great work in art class! Love, Dad
-- Dad
- on May 15, 2019
Jack, your artwork made me smile as I thought back to our trip to New York City. Seeing the Rockettes was such a treat, my favorite part was the soldiers. You did a great job by drawing buildings. The way you layered them helps me see their depth. And drawing them from a corner shows me that they are not flat shapes. Good job! I love you!
-- Rah Rah
- on May 15, 2019
 
Jack, This is a really cool looking vase. I especially like the dragon the on the vase and the cool writing in the upper left hand corner. The flowers remind me of the cherry blossoms when they bloom in Wasgington, DC. Keep up the great work! Love, Dad
-- Dad
- on April 9, 2019
 
Jack, I am so excited you worked with clay. It is an exciting material. What a great idea - a wind chime. I cannot wait to see where you hang it. It can break so be careful. Marmie
-- Marmie
- on March 13, 2019
Great job, Jack! The wind chime will look great hung up in the house. Mommy will especially like the hearts on it. Keep up the great work in art class! Love, Dad
-- Dad
- on March 7, 2019
 
Wow! I love your plaid pattern on this butterfly. It is beautiful. Is that you watching it?
-- Rah Rah
- on March 13, 2019
 
Jack, What a beautiful set of wind chimes! I love your color combination - you did a great job covering the clay well. And your shapes are so fun. They are going to look so great on your back patio. When I have a porch I hope you will make a set for me.
-- Rah Rah
- on March 13, 2019
 
Really great picture! You made our house look so good. I can just see myself sitting by the fire and then also in the basement playing Nintendo with you. You have a great eye! Keep up the great work in class. Can't wait to see more art! Love, Dad
-- Dad
- on January 24, 2019
 
Jack, This is a such a great snowman. He looks so life like. He reminds me a lot of the snowman from a movie called Jack Frost. Very proud of all the art work that you make and I hope you continue to enjoy making things for your mom and I to enjoy. Love, Dad
-- Dad
- on January 2, 2019
 
Jack, This looks exactly like the corn we see when we go to the farm to get into the fall spirit. It is amazing how real it looks. I thought you might have actually put pieces of real corn on the paper. Very proud of you! Keep up the great work. Love, Dad
-- Dad
- on November 30, 2018
Jack, wouldn’t the Pilgrims have been surprised to see your corn at their Thanksgiving feast. I love it and I do like Kandinsky as well. He is a very interesting artist and he thought of music when he was making his art. We will have to talk about him when we are together next week. I am always so excited when I see your work. So many interesting artists you are discovering in your art classes. Hooray!
-- Marmie
- on December 5, 2018
 
Eeeek! The snake was so well hidden I almost missed him. I like this snake much better than the one we saw at the nature center. Do you remember that one?
-- Rah Rah
- on November 21, 2018
This is an amazing use of the the snakes camouflage to blend into the environment of the picture. Keep up the great work! We are very proud of you!
-- Dad
- on November 9, 2018
 
This is such an amazing waterfall. The lighter blue color at the bottom of the falls looks exactly like the mist that is created when the water hits the bottom of the falls. I also really like the sky. It reminds of of a late afternoon sun set over looking the waterfall. Very proud of your artwork! Love, Dad
-- John
- on October 9, 2018
 
Jack, another wonderful painting. Your pictures are so interesting with all that is going on. This looks like is a real story can be told. Cannot wait to hear it. Love, Marmie
-- Marmie
- on June 7, 2018
 
Ouch! I would hate to touch a cactus. What a fabulous picture. I can see the desert colors which are so different from the spring and summer greens in Northbrook.. I really love this work with paint, cut paper and oil pastels. Did you have fun with this project?
-- Marmie
- on June 7, 2018
 
Brr! It looks so cold. I love the winter story and you filled your picture spacewith a foreground, middle and background. The orange house looks so far away. Happy winter for a little while longer. Love, Marmie
-- Marmie
- on March 29, 2018
 
Jack, what a great football player. He looks very strong. Who is #30? You have done such wonderful art work this year. Lots of interesting ideas and ways to tell your story. What is your favorite art material. I am so proud of you.
-- Marmie
- on January 31, 2018
 
Dear Jack, I love your candle. I can see you blowing it out at the dinner table. You did a wonderful job showing the flame. You know I love candles lit for the dinner table. This is a keeper. I miss you! love Marmie
-- Marmie
- on January 31, 2018
 
Jack, I love your giraffe. You did such a great job with all those materials - scissors. Oil pastels and watercolor. And you placed the giraffe in an environment. I wonder if you made up a story about him and gave it a name. And do you know I love this animal. I think giraffes are beautiful. I love that it has thos great shapes all over the body. I do not think I would like it as much with a plain body. Love, Marmie
-- Marmie
- on November 30, 2017
Jack, when I saw your giraffe and the landscape, I felt like I was back in Africa.. The giraffe is my favorite animal. Keep up your art work. I'm proud of your work.
-- Gub
- on November 30, 2017
 
Jack, you are getting so good that I can't figure out any more which one is my favorite piece. I think they all are great!!!! The pumpkins are so bright against the dark night. Is one of those stars your Grandfather Dick? Say hello to Mom, Dad and Elsa! I love you, Gub
-- Gub
- on November 30, 2017
 
Yeah, Jack, I really like your rainbow line art. This may be my favorite one! Keep up your good work. I can't wait to see your next one. I love you, GUB
-- Gub
- on November 30, 2017
 
I don't want to get too close to those birds because their feathers will tickle my nose. Do you know that your Mom's Grandmother and Marmie's, Judy, Drex and my mother loved Cardinals? I can't decide which bird I like the best so I am going to choose the butterfly in the background who looks all alone.
-- Gub
- on June 12, 2017
 
Jack, the colors and movement make me want to be there with all the activity going on. Do I see Nellie, Will and Emma?
-- Gub
- on June 12, 2017
 
Jack, what a great flower. It looks like something from my garden in New Jersey. It's too beautiful to pick!
-- Gub
- on June 12, 2017
Dear Jack, I love all the interesting detail in your picture. Your really filled your spaces. The picture becomes a great story. And you know how I love flowers! Love Marmie
-- Polly
- on May 31, 2017
What a happy picture you made, Jack. I love it!
-- Sarah
- on May 31, 2017
 
I am so excited about your pot. Will this go on your desk? What can you put in it. What colors besides blue did you use? I wonder what was your favorite art project this year. I am so proud of you. Love Marmie
-- Marmie
- on May 31, 2017
What a beautiful pot, Jack. I love the deep blue inside!
-- Sarah
- on April 26, 2017
 
Love your artwork sweet boy. Not only can you sing, you can draw too...just like Marmie. Keep up the good work.
-- Judy
- on December 21, 2016
Wow, John. That is really good! I like your smile. You will have to do another one when get your new teeth. I put your self-portrait on my computer screen so I can see it when I use the computer. I am so proud of you, Jack.
-- GUB
- on December 21, 2016
 
Dear Jack, What a great job with scissors! They look as if they are moving on the blue paper. Happpy art making!
-- Marmie
- on December 21, 2016
 
Dear Jack, What a great portrait. You made your face look real with all the details - teeth, ears, opened eyes and eyebrows. I am so proud of you.
-- Marmie
- on December 21, 2016
 
Dear Jack, You did a great job with those mittens. They look so real. I will need a pair when I come to Northbrook.
-- Marmie
- on December 21, 2016
 
Eeeek! A mouse. I love it!
-- Rah Rah
- on December 21, 2016
 
These look so warm and the decoration would go perfectly with my jacket. Can I borrow them?
-- Rah Rah
- on December 21, 2016
 
Jack, I LOVE the detail in your self-portrait. The teeth and green eyes add a special touch. Nice work!
-- Rah Rah
- on December 21, 2016
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