Nishi17's Comments (10)

Love how you go into detail about your planing and well written plans. Also you have a good amount of materials and ideas to put onto your origami.

This piece utilizes precise geometric folds to manipulate light, shadow, and visual weight to effectively portray a 3-dimensional structure.

This piece utilizes crisp geometric folds, to manipulate light, shadow , and visual weight to effectively portray a 3-dimensional structure.

The different colors and shapes of the whales adds individualism to the whole family unit. The repetition of whale types adds unity.

I love the colors that you used.

I like how in this composition you highlighted five entirely different fish, making sure each one stood out with its own unique colors, shapes, and sizes.

This composition effectively addresses both unity and individuality, through the similar origami folds of each of the sea creatures, portraying a unified family of these structures, as well as the unique and balanced/rhythmic patterns painted on each of the creatures.

I like how all the origami pieces tie in together as well as the colors and patterns that you designed onto the individual parts.

This composition effectively captures different shades of grey in order to create dimension within the work.

The contrast in your composition create rhythm in your piece. The different value tones help to create depth in the different rolls.