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Phillip, I'm glad you were able to troubleshoot and work through challenges you had. A bit more variation in the water area might have been helpful - perhaps gradients of blue, or simply different types of blue? What are some additional details you could add to describe your swan and give more interest to this main character? If you were to do another tessellation on the computer, try to aim for greater precision and consistency during the tessellating duplication & fitting together of the shapes. Lots of great things learned!
- Melissa (teacher at Seoul Foreign School) on January 30, 2015