Your artwork is really good because I can see what your shape is. But I think you should have change some of the colors, because the colors looks the same so it doesn't really stand-out for me. -- Helen
- on February 13, 2014
I like that you were creative with your fish by putting things like letters on the scales. I think you could've chosen a dark color and a light color to color your fishes with to be able to tell the difference between one fish and another better. Besides that I really like your tesselation because you didn't have any gaps, and you used two different shades of purple for one of your fish, and two different shades of blue for the other. -- Annica
- on February 13, 2014
Fiona, you demonstrated a good understanding of creating tessellations and using the app. Your colors are unified (analogous colors). Who is Jack Libing? You have some details; I'd encourage you to add even more so we can tell that the black parts are actually the tail (I thought they might be feet - what types of details would help show this?) Some tessellated shapes were very precise; in others, some gaps were noted. It's a challenge, but can really enhance the overall effect. I'm glad that you were pleased with the final result.
- Melissa (teacher at Seoul Foreign School) on January 28, 2014
