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I liked how you made your artwork in a unique shape. But if this was my art project I would of added more details. Overall this is very good.
-- Jamie
- on April 3, 2014
Michelle, really nice design. I think the colors contrast well with each other. Except, sorry, but i can't tell what it is. Still, you worked hard and I think you are very good art.
-- Jeongin
- on April 3, 2014
such a beautiful pattern!!! must be proud of yourself!!!!! great work!!
-- hyesil
- on April 3, 2014
Michelle, as you mentioned, one of the fun, but challenging things in tessellations is to "see" what shape appears, and not what you'd like it to be. Your dragon is very curvilinear, with each contrasting well against the other. A few places have gaps, but the overall effect is still neat. Working with layers is at first not very intuitive, but you figured it out! I'd love to see more details in your dragon - eyes, teeth, scales, etc. which would really make your dragon come alive for others.
- Melissa (teacher at Seoul Foreign School) on January 28, 2014
MY EYES! Hehe, just kidding. Anyway, if this was my work I would not touch the trackpad and might drool because the art looks like fruit roll ups! Mmmm! I got a question, why did you choose red? Kind of random but also, I notice you chose to do neon because neons AWESOME! What I like about this page is the way you put the red and orange together, also green and neon together. This piece reminds me of other things that is FRUIT ROLL UPS!
-- Claire
- on April 3, 2014
I love your project. It is so fun and spazzy. It makes me feel like I am in a fire because it looks like it. Even it’s so cool I think that you should add more shapes to make it stand out more. It doesn’t mean you have to do it is just a suggestion. I like the colors in your tessellation. The green, yellow, orange, and red really mix well together. I really enjoy looking at your tessellation. From, Jenna
-- Jenna
- on April 3, 2014