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Detail is a critical aspect of some drawings that communicate interesting subjects to the viewer. Keep focusing on greater control of values and observation skills to help understand what makes something interesting to everyone.
- Laurence (teacher at Central Middle School) on January 21, 2014
 
You did a good job of capturing the objects in the still life. Empower the values even more to create the illusion of form and the reflection of the ornaments.
- Laurence (teacher at Central Middle School) on January 21, 2014
 
Controlling values and hues with acrylics help develop depth and visual perspective. Explore blending and mixing of colors is important.
- Laurence (teacher at Central Middle School) on December 10, 2013
 
This is an example of what you have the ability to do when you follow through on a process. This is a good drawing that utilizes the values of the paper with only two other colors. Keep working on observation of the images and scenes to help communicate what is seen.
- Laurence (teacher at Central Middle School) on December 10, 2013
 
Good job. Don't be afraid to experiment more with how you apply the lines.
- Laurence (teacher at Central Middle School) on August 16, 2013
 
Good job. Don't be afraid to experiment more with how you apply the lines.
- Laurence (teacher at Central Middle School) on August 16, 2013
 
Good job. Don't be afraid to experiment more with how you apply the lines.
- Laurence (teacher at Central Middle School) on August 16, 2013
 
Good job. Don't be afraid to experiment more with how you apply the lines.
- Laurence (teacher at Central Middle School) on August 16, 2013
 
I like simple drawings that experiment with communicating what is seen. This is well done.
- Laurence (teacher at Central Middle School) on August 16, 2013
 
The interesting background develops a good sense of composition. The reflections in ornaments started with strong focus. Don't get in a hurry to quit on a project, take your time to complete what you have in mind.
- Laurence (teacher at Central Middle School) on December 19, 2012
 
Nice decision on placement of the drawing on the page to create and interesting composition. Perspective works and there is a good interaction between objects. Keep building on the details as time permits. Good job.
- Laurence (teacher at Central Middle School) on September 13, 2012
 
Nice powerful use of values and shading. This adds interest to the objects. Keep building on the details after you have developed the overall composition. Good start especially knowing you have two drawings started.
- Laurence (teacher at Central Middle School) on September 6, 2012
 
Use of space adds interest to the version. Keep experimenting and working to do your best. Good job.
- Laurence (teacher at Central Middle School) on September 6, 2012