Mia12763's Comments (17)

This work is fantastically done and I can really see the prospective you are trying to portray. This would be so much better if you were to start in pen and pull everything together. The amount of depth and different prospective that could be seen is limitless. Overall, great job and keep doing what your doing.

I love the detail you put into the drawing. I can clearly tell where this is in the school. I love the difference of angles. Keep up the good work.

I enjoy how the perspective is clearly visible. The picture shows clear depth. The circles contrasts nicely with the hard lines. The picture also shows the angle from where the photo was taken from.

The contrast is good, and the value tones go from very dark to white. The fractures are sharp and split the art nicely. The piece shows emotion by looking shocked.

The contrast between the face and back round is great as long as you keep working on it. The contrast of the backround is very apparent and clear. Keep up the good work!

Great reference photo. I can can see the shocked expression on your face. Keep up the great work!

The gradation between value tones is rough. Moreover, the value tones are not expressed properly as the medium to light gradation is not proper. Moreover, the broken lines are apparent and the plan for the rest of the artwork seems like it would be nice.

The sketch is planned out for the points and is very evenly sketched. The fragments move with each curve. The sketch is very light so it doesn’t look too dark.

The lines are thin and meandering. Vertical and wide yes very

The smooth blend between light and dark shows excellent value. The objects look 3 dimensional because of the realistic shadows.

The usage of a darker value tone, makes it seem as if the scene in the artwork was taking place during a storm. Moreover, the texture added to the trees and bushes, makes it feel as if they are shaking, adding a really unique perspective to the piece.

I enjoy the technique being used. It’s very thick

The pattens push the texture of the landscape making a realistic looking abrasive surface on the mountains and trees. However the light source is hard to identify as they is no value scales on the mountains and other aspects of the landscape.

There is depth shown and the shading is good with the outline not showing

The way the mountains were shaded truly gives it dimension and makes the mountains feel 3D. The overlapping shading on the grass also pushes the dimension.

The way you shaded each figure really creates depth and dimension. The dents on the cone specifically creates a hollow effect.

The shading creates a nebulous color scheme with nice shading. There is a lot of medium values in the shading however though.