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The contrast is good, and the value tones go from very dark to white. The fractures are sharp and split the art nicely. The piece shows emotion by looking shocked.
Posted 5 days ago by Rudra
 
The contrast between the face and back round is great as long as you keep working on it. The contrast of the backround is very apparent and clear. Keep up the good work!
Posted 9 days ago by Matthew (fan)
 
Great reference photo. I can can see the shocked expression on your face. Keep up the great work!
Posted 9 days ago by Matthew (fan)
 
The gradation between value tones is rough. Moreover, the value tones are not expressed properly as the medium to light gradation is not proper. Moreover, the broken lines are apparent and the plan for the rest of the artwork seems like it would be nice.
Posted 26 days ago by Kavin
 
The sketch is planned out for the points and is very evenly sketched. The fragments move with each curve. The sketch is very light so it doesn’t look too dark.
Posted 1 month ago by Rudra
 
The lines are thin and meandering. Vertical and wide yes very
Posted 1 month ago by Arnav (fan)
 
The smooth blend between light and dark shows excellent value. The objects look 3 dimensional because of the realistic shadows.
Posted 2 months ago by Brooke
 
The usage of a darker value tone, makes it seem as if the scene in the artwork was taking place during a storm. Moreover, the texture added to the trees and bushes, makes it feel as if they are shaking, adding a really unique perspective to the piece.
Posted 2 months ago by Kavin
 
I enjoy the technique being used. It’s very thick
Posted 3 months ago by Elysha (fan)
 
The pattens push the texture of the landscape making a realistic looking abrasive surface on the mountains and trees. However the light source is hard to identify as they is no value scales on the mountains and other aspects of the landscape.
Posted 3 months ago by Yug (fan)
 
There is depth shown and the shading is good with the outline not showing
Posted 3 months ago by Rudra
 
The way the mountains were shaded truly gives it dimension and makes the mountains feel 3D. The overlapping shading on the grass also pushes the dimension.
Posted 3 months ago by Anvika
 
The way you shaded each figure really creates depth and dimension. The dents on the cone specifically creates a hollow effect.
Posted 4 months ago by Anvika (fan)
 
The shading creates a nebulous color scheme with nice shading. There is a lot of medium values in the shading however though.
Posted 4 months ago by Arnav (fan)