James, I am impressed with this artwork. The intensity of the charcoal pencil color gives the work emotion: the white moon vs dark sky, and the dark shadows vs light table. I also love that you included the circular moon ties back to the spherical shape; using repeating shapes or elements serves as another interesting element. My only recommendation would be to keep the pencil strokes creating the sku more consistent so the linear aspect doesn't distract from the other images which you want the viewer to focus on. I LOVE YOU!! Congratulations on a beautiful artwork. ~ Mom
