Anthony7652's Comments (19)

The vibrant color palette you chose for the suit is striking and stays very true to the source material’s comic book roots, rather than just drawing in black and white. Your shading on the face captures a great sense of three-dimensional form, especially around the nose and the cheekbones. It’s impressive to see how you used the muscle reference to try and sculpt the build of the character, but a bit more definition in the shoulders and chest may have proven to shine through even more.

The bold, textured line work on the character's coat gives the piece a fantastic sense of weight and movement as well as a dark shadowed vibe. Including your anatomy reference alongside the final drawing shows growth and transparency in your art process. The foreshortening on the hand is ambitious and adds a lot of dynamic energy to the pose, as well as a great illusion of dimension.

The shift from dark to light is clear and easy to follow. You did a good job spacing the dots to control the value changes. It shows you understand how shading works without blending.

The use of stippling to build value in the lower section is incredibly patient and shows a strong understanding of depth. The grid layout you've established indicates a very disciplined approach to maintaining accurate proportions, but you may want to try and keep your lines a bit straighter and more exact, in order for the portrait to come together neatly, in more sharp and jagged pieces. You've captured a really interesting, stylized expression in the eyes that draws the viewer in immediately, with one being larger than the other and the mouth being opened largely.

You choose some good colors and the colors make me calm

The lines is good and you plane is cool

You controlled the lines that’s good

The colors is good it’s light and cool

This looks good you controlled the colors and the values

This looks soo cool the colors is good

So cool i am going to watch the show .it looks so storytelling.

Great job i love invisible. such a great drawing of him i hope. you do more like this and mabey do the blue suite.

Yes the lines are interrupted and give it a fractured look. It looks geometric and like glass shattered

The dark shadowing of the mountains and windows of the houses creates an intimidating theme which is a great show of emotion in the piece. A few more shading techniques and layered gradients could really take this piece to an even higher level.

This picture shows good emotion and expression in your face, and will make for a good portrait conveying shock. The use of editing tools to stretch certain elements also greatly elevated the amounts and depth of possible lines to use in fracturing the drawing.

The use of a French curve really stands out in the fracturing lines of your drawing, allowing you to create many different angles and light refractions throughout the piece. Holding the pencil directly from the top to completely eliminate pressure may assist in making sure the final piece does not show any remnants of the earlier sketches.

The shadows are smooth and rich. This highlights the blending that was used.

The shading is blurred and controlled. It is precise coloring.

Your choice of paint was interesting and artistic, but you may want to try stamping on a black colored surface in order to allow the paint to contrast better with any negative space.