Matthew8476's Comments (18)

I enjoy the controlled lines. It doesn’t look flat which is good. And you made some parts heavier than others to bring more contrast for example the stool on the left is darker and is in good perspective.

This pointillism project needs a lot of work. There is empty spaces all over where there should be used space which makes the work feel anticlimactic. The spaces where there IS pointillism, there is no contrast and there is no shattered effect. There is no good values between dark and light, it all feels dull and the proportions in the face, body, and glasses look mangled.

This artwork uses pointillism really well to create depth and detail in the face. The dots come together to form strong shadows and highlights, making the expression and stand out. I like how they broken and make the piece more interesting. Overall, it feels both detailed and expressive, showing a lot of effort and creativity.

the technical skill you’ve shown in this study. The progression of values across the different techniques is incredibly well-executed. Your "cross hatching" and "scribbles" sections, in particular, demonstrate a really sophisticated understanding of how to build depth and contrast through line density.

Your face is very shocked. I like the stretched out face. It made the face so much more elongated.

The contrast between the mountains and plains, along with the patterns expressed through the value tones, allows the composure to express a rough and smooth feeling in elements like the mountains and trees. Moreover, the shading allows a clear distinction between elements like the mountains, trees, bush, people and plains.

I enjoy the lightness of the lines. It’s very storytelling

I enjoy the stretch of the picture. It’s definitely shocked

I enjoy the different perspective and angles.

The transition from light to dark is seen in these value scales. However the transition is uneven at times like in the invent your own technique and in some it goes from light to dark to light like in the squiggles.

There is depth shown and the shading is good with the outline not showing

The repetition is done excellently at first , but as it moves down, the spacing is subdued. The circles are sudden.

I enjoy the pattern. I feel the rhythm throughout the artwork.

The pencil you chose for the green colored scale shows a bumpy texture against the white paper, and this is a nice detail that remains mostly obvious throughout every separate shade.

I enjoy the color you picked for the shading and how it gradually gets darker with more layers. Your art is very neat and organized.

The contrast of your colors are interesting and capture the theme of the elements very well, and the shadowing you implemented highlight the individual stamps very well.

I enjoy the contrast between blue and green with the yellow. The negative spaces makes the weaving seem dimensional

I enjoy the black shadow which makes an emphasis on the green