Sarah3604's Comments (18)

I love the colors and how they flow together. It looks like a reflection from the sky is being mirrored into a beautiful moral on the water.

I love the colors you chose for this it is so vibrant and fun! The contrast is also very very well done, the river or path that leads towards the mountain not only is a great way to break up the black foreground but also a good way to create movement throughout the piece. The sunset in the background adds great highlight to the mountains but is also generally very pretty?

The artwork presents a landscape with a vivid color palette effectively capturing a se nose of natural beauty. The use of the cardboard to make the teas true and contrasting hues create depth, drawing me more into the scene. It’s truly an amazing piece and really shows the richness of nature.

I like how the dark blue and black is brought into several areas of this piece. On the edge of the land, the blue makes the piece seem more alive and vibrant. The black in the top corners of the piece helps focus the viewer’s eye inward. The texture is varied in this piece with the mountains appearing more solid and darker while its reflections in the water are heavily textured and more gentler in contrast. The variations in color in the sky are very visually interesting.

The composition of the piece allows the viewers’ eyes to travel around and down the composition all the way to the smaller books at the bottom. The different colors of the books adds contrast to the piece and depth. Additionally, the artist adds originality to the piece by choosing a unique and challenging perspective for the artwork, intriguing the viewer and their perception of the composition.

The vertical lines of the trees guide the eye through the deep space of the landscape.The cool colors of the water create harmony with the surrounding environment. The repeated tree forms create rhythm and balance within the composition.

The high angle chosen for this portrait allows for an interesting composition. The artist clearly understands the changes in a persons appearance based on the viewer position. They also adjusted their anatomy well to adapt to this.

Your artwork combines expressiveness and different line depths to create a very engaging piece. The overall imbalance and unity of the upper and lower part actually make the piece feel complete.

The coloring of the negative space to be extreme dark pushes the paper and makes it look like it sticks out. The use of values makes from the origin of the crumples pushes this effect making it more realistic.

This piece has a lot of motion with the direction of the lines. Areas where lines are more concentrated on the paper push shadows and depth.

I like how there are so many lines in the shape are all getting closer together and getting farther away from each other. It also shows signs of dimension and form by the way it is drawn.

The simple colors and lines used here come together to make a truly intriguing and beautiful design that clearly reflects this assignments title.

Strong use of contour lines effectively emphasizes the dynamic folds and depth of the form.

Strong use of contour lined effectively emphasizes the dynamic folds and depth of the form.

I enjoy that I can feel the texture through the paper

This shows excellent understanding of the planes of the paper: different lines create contrast, and density creates values and therefore depth. You understood how to follow contour lines to communicate form, and where and when to have the lines follow different contours of different planes, something I struggled with.

The use of both curved and straight lines enforces how light is hitting the paper’s planes. The dark background adds strong contrast to your piece.

Your use of contrast really helped push the dimension of your work.