Molly10309's Comments (16)

WOW

Excellent

The shape of it is realistic. I would make the shoelaces bigger.

I really like the flowers and how their showing emotion of dying. Next time you could add a fun background.

Wow. Powerful. Excellent job. Thank you for taking this seriously and thinking about it. You ROCK Mol!

I really like how you did the colors darker for each color chose. Why did you decide on those colors? I think you could of made each row/line even.

I love all the colors. What made you decide to use these colors?If you did this again I would just make sure that your lines look nicer.

Molly I really like the layout you put your pictures in. My only question is why don't you have a background? The one thing I think you could've improved is explaining why the other balance is similar to symetrical balance

I like the titles What was the favorite park about your vaccation? I dont have any corrections for you.

I like the black background, and the way you put everything together. What was your favorite part of Arizona? I think you did good on your Artwork.

I really like how you did one vacation and made a whole layout off of that. What was the best part about this trip? I think that you could add more small details.

Molly I really like how you made the background black. How come you only have one header on the second page. I think you could've maybe added some color to the page to make it look more appealing.

I like how the background of your art is black. Did you think of adding more color to the words or maybe a different font? That would make your artwork look very colorful and happier.

The captions are nice. To much white space. Where did you find the font on the headline? Great Job :)

I really like yours, I think your captions were in good spots. I think you could of made some of the pictures bigger to get rid of white space.

i like your layout. where did you take the photo.