Molly10309's Comments (16)

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WOW
- Ted (teacher at Boyer Valley Middle/High School) on May 5, 2022
 
Excellent
- Ted (teacher at Boyer Valley Middle/High School) on March 30, 2022
 
The shape of it is realistic. I would make the shoelaces bigger.
- Reagan on March 30, 2022
 
I really like the flowers and how their showing emotion of dying. Next time you could add a fun background.
- Lily on February 9, 2022
 
Wow. Powerful. Excellent job. Thank you for taking this seriously and thinking about it.
You ROCK Mol!
- Ted (teacher at Boyer Valley Middle/High School) on December 1, 2021
 
I really like how you did the colors darker for each color chose. Why did you decide on those colors? I think you could of made each row/line even.
- Lily on February 9, 2022
I love all the colors. What made you decide to use these colors?If you did this again I would just make sure that your lines look nicer.
- Sarah on February 9, 2022
 
Molly I really like the layout you put your pictures in. My only question is why don't you have a background? The one thing I think you could've improved is explaining why the other balance is similar to symetrical balance
- Sylvia on February 9, 2022
 
I like the titles What was the favorite park about your vaccation? I dont have any corrections for you.
- Maddie on February 9, 2022
I like the black background, and the way you put everything together. What was your favorite part of Arizona? I think you did good on your Artwork.
- Maddie on February 9, 2022
 
I really like how you did one vacation and made a whole layout off of that. What was the best part about this trip? I think that you could add more small details.
- Lauryn on February 9, 2022
 
Molly I really like how you made the background black. How come you only have one header on the second page. I think you could've maybe added some color to the page to make it look more appealing.
- Sylvia on February 9, 2022
I like how the background of your art is black. Did you think of adding more color to the words or maybe a different font? That would make your artwork look very colorful and happier.
- Reese on February 9, 2022
 
The captions are nice. To much white space. Where did you find the font on the headline? Great Job :)
- Reagan:) on February 9, 2022
 
I really like yours, I think your captions were in good spots. I think you could of made some of the pictures bigger to get rid of white space.
- Lily on February 9, 2022
i like your layout. where did you take the photo.
- Amber on February 9, 2022