Hi Ethan, I liked the rainbow-colored arches going into the distance. Was that your head in the middle of your rainbows? What were you thinking about when you designed the picture?
Posted 5 years ago by Grandpa
I see that you drew the buildings smaller as they got further away. Very cool.
Posted 5 years ago by Peggy
I like the way you are sending love across the distance. I send my love to you across the sky. Happy colors.
Posted 5 years ago by Peggy
This makes me happy to see blossoms, birds and colors.
Posted 5 years ago by Gram
Hi Ethan, I like the rainbow bands of color that you added in the background. It makes the cherry blossoms stand out nicely. Did you think of that yourself? Do you like using watercolor paint more than drawing with colored pencils or crayons? Love, Grandpa
Posted 5 years ago by Grandpa
Hi Ethan, I liked your happy ending to the story. Making the picture of the skyscraper building go all the way to the top of the box was a good idea. It made me think that the building was really, really tall. Love, Grandpa
Posted 5 years ago by Grandpa
Hi Ethan, Nice use of lines and colors. Here's another way to make a 5-pointed star: Start out exactly like you did. But when you get to the end of your last line, connect that end to the beginning of the first line.
Posted 5 years ago by Grandpa D
E: I like your use of many colors! Also, your stars have great shapes.
-- Auntie Rachel
Posted 6 years ago
Hi E! Your time machine looks incredible. However, I think that the person who is being sucked in doesn't look very happy. Maybe he is scared of all the creatures he is seeing.
-- Auntie Rachel